I am now back online and excited to say that The Dark Lady is in rounds with the editor and I should be seeing edits within the week. I am looking forward to getting them. It is so much different from the first time I was waiting for edits. I was nervous and not looking forward to changing anything in my story. Now I get excited to get my edits back, to make my story perfect for my reader.
I will be announcing my 100 Lucky winners in The Dark Lady Celebration Giveaway in Early 2013, as soon as I have an approved cover and know my release date. Please stop by http://dawnchandler.net/giveaway.html and read the first three chapters and sign up for your chance to be one of the lucky winners.
The Dark Lady
The Dark Lady is a historical romance set in 1100 England
during the time of the dark and dangerous knights. It is a turbulent time of
upheaval and strife. During this time a young female child is born to a loving
and doting father and a jealous, spiteful mother. Angered because her arranged
marriage was not to the man she loved and jealous of the way her husband doted
over and spoiled their little girl she sought revenge. Stealing away in the
middle of the night with the man she loved she took the one year old girl with
her. In order to keep the baby hidden she lied to the child and everyone around
her. She told everyone the child was a boy, and when Vanessa was old enough to
question it she explained to her that her father wanted her dead. That she had
been born a girl and her father had wanted to kill her because he had wanted a
son. She told Vanessa that she had stolen her away the very night she was born
and had hid her for her own protection. She told her daughter that she must
pretend to be a boy and never go to her father for if she didn't do as she was
told he would find her and kill her. Vanessa become Van very successfully and
excelled at the art of sword play and is chosen to go to Grayweist Castle for
page training where she fights her way to the top of the group and becomes a
squire.
Excerpt from Chapter 2
The beautiful meadow where they had first
taken camp was now a ransacked and demolished mess of torn up grass and
flowers. Ruts and deep holes from the warriors and their horses made walking on
trembling legs difficult for Peter.
Out in front of all the men, the King’s man blew once again on the horn.
All stopped to look at the men standing with the King. Peter allowed his two
good friends to sit him on a low boulder, in the warm sun. When all of Peter’s
men as well as the men the King had brought were circled around them, the King
motioned to Van.
The King’s face held a serious expression as he addressed the brave boy.
“Van Burgess, will you please stand before me.” Van approached the King on
shaky legs, head bowed. He appeared nervous and that surprised Peter. Why was
this arrogant and self-assured boy so nervous around the King? Why was he so
reluctant to be questioned or to be the center of attention? It almost appeared
to Peter that the boy was hiding something. Peter took a deep breath deciding
that more than likely the boy was just unaccustomed to all the fuss.
Peter’s head was beginning to ache and he knew it would soon be a
blaring headache. He took deep breaths and concentrated on the King and Van and
tried to ignore the throb that was becoming insistent. The King never took his
eyes from the boy as his loud voice boomed across the torn up field. The
bellowing voice tore through Peter’s head like a stampede of sheep. Prodding
and gouging as they ripped through the soft tissue of his mind.
“All who have gathered here will be witness to great deeds today.” Van
jerked his face up to the king’s in surprise, “Van Burgess, for your bravery on
the field of battle. For your selfless act to save another, with no regards to
your safety or to personal gain. For your personal stand to protect your
beliefs in the face of opposition I am here to acknowledge you. Kneel.”
Van dropped to one knee and bowed his head. Between the black clothes
and the deep black hair the boy looked like a small dark boulder. The King pulled
a sword from the scabbard at his belt. The shiny metal of the newly forged
sword touched each of Van’s shoulders as the King said the words that made him
a knight.
Peter’s pride swelled within him as he listened to the familiar words.
Richard cleared his throat beside him and Peter caught sight of the pride and
emotion in his face. With a grin Peter watched the King speak the final words
of the creed. “Now rise. Rise as Sir Burgess. The Dark Knight.”
Thanks for the excerpt. This book sounds really good
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